Dzyliya
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I agree with Zvizda. It was the very interesting contest. Teachers are so creative people!!! This contest has proved it.
Thanks a lot for the opportunity to take part in it. Thank you very much to the colleagues for their amazing limericks!
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The cat was free.
It was sitting in the tree.
He wished the mouse to see
but they said it was travelling by the sea.
So the cat had to catch a flying bee.
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The day was cool
and the cat decided to swim in the pool.
The dog thought that he was a goon.
"The river will be warm soon.
May be the cat is affected by the Moon?"
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The cat was eating some meat
Suddenly he saw the master's feet!
The cat did not want him to meet.
So he had to do a great leap.
The cat thought it was his life's feat.
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One day the cat Mary
was too merry.
The cat Bob asked her to marry.
She went to her sweetheart using the ferry
But before she had bought a big berry!
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The cat had a dream.
Wnen he awoke he was full of a great bean!
He wanted to be like a bright beam.
That's why he used a little cream
but when he took the mirror he made a scream!!!
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Thank you very much but I've lost the wish!
Dzyliya, простите, пожалуйста, если чем-то обидел. Но я хотел лишь только помочь Вам исправить некоторые недочеты. Дело в том, что, как раз в лимериках необходимо, чтобы рифмовались гласные звуки. Все мы делаем иногда ошибки и этого никак не избежать. Не останавливайтесь и продолжайте творить. У Вас хорошо получается.
Спасибо за веру в меня, но у меня такая же цель, как и у Вас - участие. Просто попробовать свои силы.
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Thanks a lot for your attention to my limericks. I suppose that that everybody knows that there is the difference of the sounds(the length) in the words duck park.
In my opinion the words (watch - match) have the last similar sound.
Vladislav I am not a poet. I am so tired old teacher. I do not ask anybody to guess that my limericks are ideal.I only wanted to take part in the contest and I did it. That's all.
I wish you to be the winner although there are two women the best ones! They have written wonderful limericks.
Спасибо, конечно, за материал, предоставленный из Википедии. Это я и сам знаю.
Простите, но Вы меня совсем не поняли. В Вашем лимерике я пометил слова, которые совсем не рифмуются, они имеют разные звуки. Это слова match и watch. В втором лимерике: слова mark и duck не рифмуются. У них, соответственно, тоже разные звуки.
Вы пишете и выделяете другим цветом "конец последней строки повторяет конец первой". Посмотрите, пожалуйста, внимательно. Где же здесь повторения:
1. The cat decided the championship to watch
So confused cat missed the match
2. The cat was walking in the park
The cat gave drink to old,strange duck
Спасибо за внимание!
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Dzyliya, в этом стихотворении во 2 и 5 строчке не рифмуются слова
Спасибо огромное за Ваше творчество!Лимерик (поэзия)
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Материал из Википедии — свободной энциклопедии.Традиционно лимерик имеет пять строк, построенных по схеме AABBA, причём в каноническом виде конец последней строки повторяет конец первой.
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Лимерик (поэзия)
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Материал из Википедии — свободной энциклопедииТрадиционно лимерик имеет пять строк, построенных по схеме AABBA, причём в каноническом виде конец последней строки повторяет конец первой!!
Dzyliya, в этом стихотворении во 2 и 5 строчке не рифмуются слова
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The "Titul" had announced an unusual contest.
The cat had idea and great interest.
He wanted to write a limerick himself
He read all the books from mother's big shelf.
The wise cat wanted to be one of the best!
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The cat was walking in the park.
He had a jar with magic mark
"Who drinks this juice
Will always be in use"
Nobody wanted it so the cat watered the bark.
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The cat decided the championship to watch,
In order not be late he bought a golden watch.
But on the way
they gone away.
So confused cat had to buy another watch.
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I have a cat sly as a fox
It hides all things i give in box.
The more it has,
The more it wants.
Have you ever met such cat sly as a fox?
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One day cats had a conference
"We need to have a real defence.
Defence from cruel, cruel mice,
They have the teeth like strong, strong ice."
As the result they build the iron fence.
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One stormy, rainy night
Two cats began to fight.
They broke the window, chimney and roof,
The police had a photo it to prove.
The house had a terrible sight.
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Екатерина Юрьевна, вперед и с песней! Чем дальше, тем веселее!
На дне рождения было ну ооооочень весело!
Классно!
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Какие замечательные мастера! С началом творчества! Ура!
Спасибо!
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The cat was looking at the bird
and he wished it so much to be hurt.
The cat jumped very high
he thought that he might fly.
But the ground made him burnt.
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The kitten decided to paint the door.
But he could not hold the brush in his paw!
He painted ears, his nose and tail
it was the greatest kitten's life fail.
The kitten wished paint the floor!
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The beautiful cat's name was Tracy
In one hot summer day she became crazy.
She decided to fight with the dog.
she thought it was a frog.
After the fight she bacame razy.
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One day the cat flew to the Moon
but he forgot how the rocket move.
He was afraid of doing it,
so he decided to eat some meat.
"I am too brave I will be able it to prove".
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My clever white and noisy cat
Sometimes in summer goes mad.
He jumps like goat
and even eats a little oat.
So I have to catch the mice for cat!
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I knew the little funny cats.
Who could knit Venetian lace mats,
They sold them never.
And you could not find them anywhere,
because they hid their lovely mats.
Конкурс "Стань поэтом - сочини лимерик!"
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