Спроси учителя - консультации по английскому языку

[Harry Smith]

Да, это просто глаз замыливается, так постоянно бывает, особенно когда нет времени как следует сосредоточиться. Можно сначала no сказать, но тогда перед tenderness лучше не and, а nor.

 

А может так еще лучше будет? "There is neither _ admiration ,nor _ tenderness and _ fondness in their relationships.

[Teddy McArdle]

Спасибо большое!

[Teddy McArdle]

Are these two ok??

 

 

Dao.

Everyone considers me as a little bit crazy. They are not able to understand my passion roaming the vast Russian landscape. They can not accept that I’m seeking my place in life. I reject most of conservative values and try to find out what is important for me. My searches led me to read lots of literature: philosophy, psychology, anthropology etc. Books marked me to embark on new style of life. I perceive a literature as a catalyst for my transformation. My friends and I were profoundly marked by seminal works of Nietzsche, Sartre, Camus, Fromm, Marx and others. These great writers prompted us to look for new ways of living. I have always believed in my intelligent prowess and because of it I’ve always carried out my own decisions. Of course, many things haven’t paned out, but I’m strongly going through my way. All of my life mistakes are like drafts for my future big success.

 

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Freedom.

“This is my favorite spot” said Neo. It was the literary program. Neo likes reading. The program looks like a big library. In particular, there are only philosophy books. Neo has always challenged an ignorance. Neo has always been credited with making people free.

The focal point of Matrix is controlling people. Neo made a history when he won an agent and started a fight against the machines. Lots of young men were named after him. They get animated when they are listening about his adventures.

[Harry Smith]

Are these two ok??

 

I only went through grammar.... I was short of time and couldn't pay attention to the vocabulary...

 

Everyone considers me a little bit crazy. .............................. Books marked me to embark on new style in life. I perceive literature as a catalyst for my transformation. ...... These great writers prompted us to look for new ways of life. I have always believed in my intelligent prowess and due to it I’ve always carried out my own decisions. Of course, many things haven’t paned out, but I’m strongly going through my way. All the mistakes in my life are like drafts for my future big success.

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“This is my favorite spot” said Neo. It was a literary program. Neo likes reading. The program looks like a big library. In particular, there are only philosophy books. Neo has always challenged ignorance. Neo has always been credited with making people free.

The focal point of Matrix is controlling people. Neo made a history when he won an agent and started a fight against the machines. Lots of young men were named after him. They get animated when they are listening about his adventures.

[Rika]

Здравствуйте! Сегодня у нас была олимпиада. Было эссе на тему "How can one make their home safe (for living and well-being)?"Одни писали о безопасности дома: осторожно с электричеством, взрывы газа и тп. Другие о комфорте в доме и теплой атмосфере с близкими.А вы как думаете? О чем эта тема? Или все правы? Спасибо.

[Laddy]

Здравствуйте! Сегодня у нас была олимпиада. Было эссе на тему "How can one make their home safe (for living and well-being)?"Одни писали о безопасности дома: осторожно с электричеством, взрывы газа и тп. Другие о комфорте в доме и теплой атмосфере с близкими.А вы как думаете? О чем эта тема? Или все правы? Спасибо.

Скорее всего все правы.

[valentin 61]

Здравствуйте! Сегодня у нас была олимпиада. Было эссе на тему "How can one make their home safe (for living and well-being)?"Одни писали о безопасности дома: осторожно с электричеством, взрывы газа и тп. Другие о комфорте в доме и теплой атмосфере с близкими.А вы как думаете? О чем эта тема? Или все правы? Спасибо.

первые писали правильно так как safe-безопасный. Но только и не столько надо было уделить внимание о правилах безопасности с электричеством, газом сколько безопасности в отношении ограбления, воровства,недоброжелательных соседях, скандалах, вмешательство в личную жизнь, в общем больше на социалку. В США существует понятия-friendly community(доброжелательное сообщество) и safe community или criminal free. Сами понимаете что это разные вещи.

[Radislav Millrood]

первые писали правильно так как safe-безопасный. Но только и не столько надо было уделить внимание о правилах безопасности с электричеством, газом сколько безопасности в отношении ограбления, воровства,недоброжелательных соседях, скандалах, вмешательство в личную жизнь, в общем больше на социалку. В США существует понятия-friendly community(доброжелательное сообщество) и safe community или criminal free. Сами понимаете что это разные вещи.

Home safety - это все же больше о том, how to turn one's home into a safe environment for adults and children. А вот что говорит Wiki - Home safety refers to the awareness and education of risks and potential dangers in and around a home which may cause bodily harm, injury, or death to those residing in and around the physical structure of a home. Если же говорить об опасности проникновения в дом посторонних лиц или о конкретных опасностях, угрожающих домашнему очагу, то точнее было бы сказать safety against ...

[Teddy McArdle]

Harry, thank you very much!

[Harry Smith]

Harry, thank you very much!

 

You're welcome, Teddy !

[valentin 61]

Home safety - это все же больше о том, how to turn one's home into a safe environment for adults and children. А вот что говорит Wiki - Home safety refers to the awareness and education of risks and potential dangers in and around a home which may cause bodily harm, injury, or death to those residing in and around the physical structure of a home. Если же говорить об опасности проникновения в дом посторонних лиц или о конкретных опасностях, угрожающих домашнему очагу, то точнее было бы сказать safety against ...

Home safety и safe home, safe community наверное разные вещи. Когда я был в США и вынужден был искать квартиру, американские коллеги заостряли моё внимание именно на квартиры(кстати дорогие)которые расположены в safe community имея в виду именно социальный аспект(Thousand Oaks or Calabasas. LA. CA) и не рекомендовали кварталы latinos, или даже downtown LA.

[Radislav Millrood]

Home safety и safe home, safe community наверное разные вещи. Когда я был в США и вынужден был искать квартиру, американские коллеги заостряли моё внимание именно на квартиры(кстати дорогие)которые расположены в safe community имея в виду именно социальный аспект(Thousand Oaks or Calabasas. LA. CA) и не рекомендовали кварталы latinos, или даже downtown LA.

Согласен. Так и есть.

[Rika]

Спасибо! Целая дискуссия получилась. Многое открыла для себя по теме safe home. Еще раз большое спасибо!

[Radislav Millrood]

Спасибо! Целая дискуссия получилась. Многое открыла для себя по теме safe home. Еще раз большое спасибо!

Есть еще понтие safer city - движение за безопасность граждан в городе и борьба с преступностью.

[Olgino]

Проверьте пожалуйста мое произношение! Мне очень важно знать, что я говорю неправильно, какие места нужно доработать.Завтра сдавать этот текст

http://narod.ru/disk/32619795001/Untitled (27).mp3.html

Заранее спасибо.

[Olgino]

Как улучшить понимание книг в оригинале?? Сейчас читаю Гарри Поттера, понимаю только 60 % от написанного.Что делать??

[Harry Smith]

Как улучшить понимание книг в оригинале?? Сейчас читаю Гарри Поттера, понимаю только 60 % от написанного.Что делать??

 

Пользуйтесь словарем или читайте сначала на русском, а потом на английском...

[Olgino]

Harry Smith я со словарем понимаю только 60% Мой словарный запас маленький, около 3500-3700 слов.У многих слов по 2 десятка значений + встречается много непонятных конструкций.Какие конструкции чаще встречаются в книгах? Что нужно прежде всего освоить из грамматики, чтобы понимать книги? Может быть герундии, порядок слов в предложении?

[Harry Smith]

Harry Smith я со словарем понимаю только 60% Мой словарный запас маленький, около 3500-3700 слов.У многих слов по 2 десятка значений + встречается много непонятных конструкций.Какие конструкции чаще встречаются в книгах? Что нужно прежде всего освоить из грамматики, чтобы понимать книги? Может быть герундии, порядок слов в предложении?

 

Вообще, если хотите понять всё, нужно знать всю грамматику английского языка. Мне кажется Вам надо увеличить словарный запас...И еще, не игнорируйте мой совет " Читайте книгу на русском перед тем чем читать на английском."

[Алексей Конобеев]

Пользуйтесь словарем или читайте сначала на русском, а потом на английском...

Или, как вариант, начать с Graded readers - многие зарубежные издательства выпускают адаптированные книги, где предложения проще, слова проще. Эти книги расписаны по уровням в зависимости от словарного запаса. Такие книги есть у разных издательств, например: http://www.penguinreaders.com/

http://elt.oup.com/teachersclub/subjects/gradedreading/?cc=global&selLanguage=en

[Olgino]

Нам в вузе задают читать только книги в оригинале((.Содержание краткое прочитала на русском-вроде полегче стало.Словарный запас увеличиваю, но пока учу только то, что задают в вузе - (мы проходим внешность, учу сейчас 11 листов с описанием внешности)).Грамматику вроде знаю-времена, пассивный залог, вообщем на уровне школьника, а на что надо сделать упор, что повторить в грамматике?

[Olgino]

Hello everyone! Please, check my text.Thank you very much in advance.

This is a picture of my family. There are four people IN the picture: my father: my mother, my brother and my myself. We are standing in the Sverdlovka street, near the drama theatre. In the background there are the large flowerbed with tulips. In there foreground there is my mother. My mother is a plump, beautiful woman with a charming smile. She is in her twenties, a middle-sized and graceful woman. She is dark-haired and pale blue-eyed. She has got a florid complexion, high forehead, a straight, pointed, thin nose and well-cut lips. She has got a rounded chin and an oval form of face. Her features are regular, delicate, and clear-cut. She has got pinned-up hair. She is a brunette. She makes up very little.

She is well-made. She bears herself well. She hold her body upright. Her shoulders are sloping and her legs are small. My mother is holding myself on her hands.My brother is standing between my mother and my father. My brother and myself have got family resemblance. We take after our parents.. My nose and brother’s nose has got the same form as father’s nose. Brother’s colour of hair is alike our father, but lighter.My brother has got flaxen hair and I have got red har. My father is a blond, but his hair darker than my brother.My complexion and brother’s complexion take father our mother.Mine and brother’s cheeks are plump as our mother.

My father is in his thirties.He is an imposing , courageous man. He is of medium height.He has got small side-whiskers.His chin is massive, and square and strong jaw.His forehead is high as my mother’s forehead.His nose is fleshy.He has got partly bald head.

My mother is with her clothes on a trichromatic sweater and a black skirt.My father is with his clothers on a jean suit and a white shirt. In the picture myself is a red-haired girl.Here I amone year old.My brother is three years old. My mother and father are teahers.My father and mother like to read..Also , my father like to travel, and my my mother like to gather mushrooms. In that time, when the picture was done, my father worked at pedagogical university.

Изменено 6 декабря, 2011 пользователем Olgino

[Olgino]

И еще такой вопрос, посоветуйте пожалуйста учебник или сайт, где можно было бы найти и потренировать 5 типов вопросов:Альтернативный, специальный, к подлежащему,общий, разделительный.Чтобы не вспомогательные слова тренировать-как в Мёрфи или Раунд Апе, а именно типы вопросов и уметь их различать.Такое реально где-нибудь найти?

[Olgino]

вот нашла некоторые ошибочки, сама отредактировала, проверьте дальше:

This is the picture of my family. There are four people in the picture: my father: my mother, my brother and myself. We are standing in the Sverdlovka street, near the drama theatre. In the background of the picture there are the large flowerbed with tulips. In there foreground there is my mother. My mother is a plump, beautiful woman with a charming smile. She is in her twenties, a middle-sized and graceful woman. She is dark-haired and pale blue-eyed. She has got a florid complexion, high forehead, a straight, pointed, thin nose and well-cut lips. She has got a rounded chin and the form of her face. Her features are regular, delicate, and clear-cut. She has got pinned-up hair. She is a brunette. She makes up very little.

She is well-made. She bears herself well. She hold her body upright. Her shoulders are sloping and her legs are small. My mother is holding me on the hands.My brother is standing between my mother and my father. My brother and I have got family resemblance. We take after our parents.. My nose and brother’s nose has got the same form as father’s nose. Brother’s colour of hair is alike our father, but lighter.My brother has got flaxen hair and I have got red har. My father is a blond, but his hair darker than my brother.My complexion and brother’s complexion take father our mother.Mine and brother’s cheeks are plump as our mother.

My father is in his thirties.He is an imposing , courageous man. He is of medium height.He has got small side-whiskers.His chin is massive, and square and his jaw is strong.His forehead is high as my mother’s forehead.His nose is fleshy.He has got a partly bald head.

My mother is with her clothes on a trichromatic sweater and a black skirt.My father is with his clothers on a jean suit and a white shirt. In the picture I am a red-haired girl.Here I am one year old.My brother is three years old. My mother and father are teahers.My father and mother like to read..Also , my father likes to travel, and my mother likes to gather mushrooms. In that time, when the picture was done, my father worked at pedagogical university.

[Olgino]

Это переведенное с русского краткое содержание нескольких глав Гарри Поттера которые я прочитала на английском для зачета.Поскольку кусок вышел очень большим, я понимаю что врядли кто захочет проверять досконально, и, в принципе, это и не нужно, так как буду рассказывать текст наизусть свободно излагая сюжет.Просто намекните в каких местах есть ошибки, над чем нужно поработать-предлоги, пассивный залог или что-то еще.Надеюсь, мою тему не удалят из-за такого большого объёма.Простите за наглость...)) :ah: Заранее спасибо всем, кто укажет на ошибки!

 

Death Eaters - пожиратели смерти (так в книге прозваны приспешники Волдеморта).

Muggles- Маглы (люди, не имеющие магических способностей).

Hogwarts - школа (ну тут все понятно)

Thestral - что-то типа метиса летающей лошади и дракона, костлявое кожистое огромное летающее создание))

Expelliarmus, Avada Kedavra, Sectumsempra,Imperius - заклинания

Firebolt -метла Гарри

Horcruxes -крестражи (определенные магические предметы)

Azkaban -тюрьма волшебников

Burrow - нОра, прозвище одного дома в книге.

Polyjuice Potion -оборотное зелье.

Portkey -портал

 

Думаю, подобные тексты только для особых любителей Гарри Поттера...)) Но все же..

 

Severus Snape and Yaxley went to a Death Eater’s meeting place where Voldemort and his henchmen and as well as Charity Burbage, the ex-teacher of Muggle Studies of Hogwarts were locating. This handsome house was the Malfoy’s Manor.Severus reported that the Order of the Phoenix don’t trust Ministry of Magic anymore and Potter would replaced to a house of a member of the Order of the Phoenix on Saturday. Yaxley said he had got an information that Potter would replaced later, in the day his legal age.Snape contended that the Yaxley’s statement is the Order of the Phoenix’s disinformation. Voldemort rather believed Snape than Yaxley. Yaxley announced as well as that he cursed by Imperius Pius Thicknesse, who was working in Ministry of Magic.Voldemort killed his captive for that, she taught Hogwarts’s students to treat Muggles kindly.He took away the wand of Lucius, going to use it against Harry Potter.The Voldemort’s own wand was prevented from resemblance to the Harry’s wand.Draco Malfoy was terrified and depressed.

In that time Harry was going to leave home (on the day, which Snape reported.) He was reading an Dumbledore’s obituary by Elphias Doge and as well as the interview by Rita Skeeter, advertising her new book, an Albus Dumbledore’s biography .

According to the first obituary, before one year Albus’s entrance to Hogwarts, his father, Percival, was put the prison, Azkaban, where he died for a cruel and public attack three Muggles. Afterwards Albus admitted that his father was guilty, but refused to talk about it. By that time Albus became famous as the most successful student ever had studied in Hogwarts.The Author mentioned the young Dumbledore’s nobility. Albus planed to start a then-traditional tour of the world after he left Hogwarts but he could not, because his mother, Kendra dead. After that one more tragedy was happened with Dumbledore, his sister, Ariana died too.Ariana’s death led to an estrangement between Albus and his brother, Aberforth, his only relative.In the obituary described other Dumbledore’s achievements and the main from which was the victory over Grindelwald in 1945.

Rita Skeeter in other way, tried to slander Dumbledore.She implied as well as that he could be guilty of his sister’s death. Harry did not believe Rita Skeeter and threw out her article.The time came when Harry left the Dursley's house for the last time and after that Harry lost the Dursley's house's protection.

Harry convinced Dursley to leave them home either under the protection of the Order of the Phoenix, fearing for they would caught by Death Eaters.The Dursley were taken away by Hestia Jones and Dedalus Diggle to a good secure place.Dudley said goodbye to Harry in very friendly way, and Harry was wondered at it.Parting Harry and Dudley shook hands each other.Before departing Petunia wanted to tell something Harry, but did not dare.Soon the Order of the Phoenix’s members arrived and Potter's friends, to help him to reach a new sanctuary. Six of them drank Polyjuice Potion transformed in Harry for disorientation of any persecutors. They with Harry and protectors went to a sanctuary, which called “Burrow”.They flew on brooms and thestrals.The real Harry with Hagrid flew by the Sirius's bike.Still in the taking off about three of tens of Death Eaters attacked them and the pursuit of each pair was beginning.Seeing between enemies Stan Shunpike, Harry attacked him the spell Expelliarmus and Eaters understood at once that he is real Harry, because he did not want to kill an enemy.Voldemort rushed for him and attacked him, but the Harry's wand make unknown to Harry magic and the Voldemort's wand (was given him by Lucius Malfoy) was destroyed.

Harry and Hagrid arrived to the house of parents Nymphadora Tonks protected by magic against Death Eaters.From there Harry and Hagrid went to the Burrow by a Portkey.There were Molly and Ginny were waiting them.There were other members of evacuation arrived.Between them were died and hurt.

Alastor Moody was killed by Voldemort, the owl Hedwig was killed by accidental hit of Avada Kedavra, and George had lost an ear.Snape hit George

by Sectumsempra.As well as Harry had lost him broom,the Firebolt during the evacuation.All the Order of the Phoenix's members understood that Death Eaters had known about the time of the evacuation beforehand, from the presence of a betrayer between member's the Order of the Phoenix's evidently.From this moment members of Order began to practice suspicion under each companion-in-arms.They were looking at a henchman under the cover of somebody of the Order's members.At the meeting the each arrived was asked by the question, the answer was known only the real suspect.Harry felt that Voldemort tortured Ollivander about why the Lucius's wand was destroyed.Harry, Ron and Hermione decided to be in the Burrow till Bill's and Fleur's wedding and after that to start searching of Horcruxes.They were doing all for protection and security their relatives.Weasley's family disguised a ghoul in seriously ill Ron.Hermione created false memories for her parents that they have never had any daughter.