Конкурс "Стань поэтом - сочини лимерик!"

[Yekayekaterina]

There lived a romantic cat in Russia

Who had a very Russian name Sasha.

Once he fell in love with Babli,

She was from picturesque Bali.

What a familiar theme for discussion!

[Yekayekaterina]

There lived a cat who created Algol,
He often used it to play on-line football.
He played so well,
There's nothing to tell.
When he lost the game there was a loud bawl.

 

Изменено 19 июня, 2015 пользователем Yekayekaterina

[Владислав]

Лимерик (поэзия)

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Материал из Википедии — свободной энциклопедии.Традиционно лимерик имеет пять строк, построенных по схеме AABBA, причём в каноническом виде конец последней строки повторяет конец первой. 

 

Спасибо, конечно, за материал, предоставленный из Википедии. Это я и сам знаю.

 

Простите, но Вы меня совсем не поняли. В Вашем лимерике я пометил слова, которые совсем не рифмуются, они имеют разные звуки. Это слова match и watch. В втором лимерике: слова mark и duck не рифмуются. У них, соответственно, тоже разные звуки.

 

Вы пишете и выделяете другим цветом "конец последней строки повторяет конец первой". Посмотрите, пожалуйста, внимательно. Где же здесь повторения:

 

1. The cat decided the championship to watch

    So confused cat missed the match

 

2. The cat was walking in the park

    The cat gave drink to old,strange duck

 

    Спасибо за внимание!

[Yekayekaterina]

There was a furry cat Simon

Who lived in the center of Brighton.

Once he went to the USA,

It was a very long way.

Oh! Here's Lincoln on the horizon!

[Yekayekaterina]

There was a cat famous for fights,

Long he fought for the cats' rights.

Soon the cats got freedom,

Their enemies had no wisdom.

Now the cat's reading Arabian Nights.

[Yekayekaterina]

Once a cat found a feather
When there was  nice weather.
He took it and smelled,
Then suddenly yelled,
"That feather belonged to a panther!"

Изменено 20 июня, 2015 пользователем Yekayekaterina

[Dzyliya]

Thanks a lot for your attention to my limericks. I suppose that that everybody knows that there is the difference of the sounds(the length) in the words duck park.

In my opinion the words  (watch - match) have the last similar sound. 

Vladislav I am not a poet. I am  so tired old teacher. I do not ask anybody to guess that my limericks are ideal.I only wanted to take part in the contest and I did it. That's all.

I wish you to be the winner although there are two women the best ones! They have written wonderful limericks.

Спасибо, конечно, за материал, предоставленный из Википедии. Это я и сам знаю.

 

Простите, но Вы меня совсем не поняли. В Вашем лимерике я пометил слова, которые совсем не рифмуются, они имеют разные звуки. Это слова match и watch. В втором лимерике: слова mark и duck не рифмуются. У них, соответственно, тоже разные звуки.

 

Вы пишете и выделяете другим цветом "конец последней строки повторяет конец первой". Посмотрите, пожалуйста, внимательно. Где же здесь повторения:

 

1. The cat decided the championship to watch

    So confused cat missed the match

 

2. The cat was walking in the park

    The cat gave drink to old,strange duck

 

    Спасибо за внимание!

 

[Yekayekaterina]

There was a cat who had a long needle,

He lived far from us in a high steeple.

Once he met a gracious hind,

She makes him very, very kind.

Now the cat loves everyone, even people. 

[Yekayekaterina]

There was a cat who looked like a donkey,

In previous life he was a funny monkey.

Oh, stop, that's enough,

I have my own fluff!

Now I am only the cat who is so spunky!

[Владислав]

Thanks a lot for your attention to my limericks. I suppose that that everybody knows that there is the difference of the sounds(the length) in the words duck park.

In my opinion the words  (watch - match) have the last similar sound. 

Vladislav I am not a poet. I am  so tired old teacher. I do not ask anybody to guess that my limericks are ideal.I only wanted to take part in the contest and I did it. That's all.

I wish you to be the winner although there are two women the best ones! They have written wonderful limericks.

 

Dzyliya, простите, пожалуйста, если чем-то обидел. Но я хотел лишь только помочь Вам исправить некоторые недочеты. Дело в том, что, как раз в лимериках необходимо, чтобы рифмовались гласные звуки. Все мы делаем иногда ошибки и этого никак не избежать. Не останавливайтесь и продолжайте творить. У Вас хорошо получается.

 

Спасибо за веру в меня, но у меня такая же цель, как и у Вас - участие. Просто попробовать свои силы.

[Yekayekaterina]

There was a cats' community

Somewhere in a deep cavity.

They did not see any light, only night.

Once they heard the falling meteorite.

All it happened in Essex county. 

[Tatyana_1959]

There lived a Grumpy Cat that disliked Cappuccino,

Its hostess made the brand of Grumppuccino.

Everybody asks, “What’s the price?”

And they want to know more about this enterprise

While drinking their usual Cappuccino.

            

[metelckina liudmila]

Thanks a lot for your attention to my limericks. I suppose that that everybody knows that there is the difference of the sounds(the length) in the words duck park.

In my opinion the words  (watch - match) have the last similar sound. 

Vladislav I am not a poet. I am  so tired old teacher. I do not ask anybody to guess that my limericks are ideal.I only wanted to take part in the contest and I did it. That's all.

I wish you to be the winner although there are two women the best ones! They have written wonderful limericks.

 

 

Dzyliya, простите, пожалуйста, если чем-то обидел. Но я хотел лишь только помочь Вам исправить некоторые недочеты. Дело в том, что, как раз в лимериках необходимо, чтобы рифмовались гласные звуки. Все мы делаем иногда ошибки и этого никак не избежать. Не останавливайтесь и продолжайте творить. У Вас хорошо получается.

 

Спасибо за веру в меня, но у меня такая же цель, как и у Вас - участие. Просто попробовать свои силы.

Боже мой! Коллеги! О чем разговор?

Из-за рифм был весь этот сыp-бор?

Мы все друг другу здесь должны помогать,

 Чтобы единым, творческим коллективом стать!

Oh, colleagues! My dear!

There are no losers or winners here!

Only limericks! A rich collection!

Peace! Friendship! And affection!

[metelckina liudmila]

 

There lived a romantic cat in Russia

Who had a very Russian name Sasha.

Once he fell in love with Babli,

She was from picturesque Bali.

What a familiar theme for discussion!

 

Such a good example of affection!!!      

[metelckina liudmila]

 К сожалению, нет времени разговор продолжать или лимерик один, другой написать.  

Нужно к выпускному готовиться и убегать, всем-всем-всем хочу добра пожелать!!!!

Не совсем складно, но от души!Продолжайте радовать друг друга, коллеги! Солнечного всем настроения!

[Yekayekaterina]

There lived a cat who wanted to swim,

He had no idea and went to the gym.

There he didn't find a drop of water,

"Oh, I need my mode of life to alter!"

The cat returned home in a good trim.

[Yekayekaterina]

There was a serious cat in Seanad

Who  abolished iPhone and iPad.

It's not the only of his reforms,

He even could rule with the storms.

The earlier same politico was his mad dad. 

[Yekayekaterina]

Once I saw a beautiful cat in chadore,
She was standing in front of the door.
Her smile was so sweet,
I felt my strong heartbeat.
I came closer and saw, it was my boss Theodore.

[Yekayekaterina]

There was a cat who sang in a choir,

He always wore a bright attire.

The cat sang loud,

God was so proud.

Later Devil heard him and turned into fire.

[Yekayekaterina]

There was a cat greedy tycoon,

But he had not a golden spoon.

He counted his money,

Then ate tasty tunny.

Later he wanted to have a pontoon.

[Yekayekaterina]

A cat put on a new sock

With a picture of an exotic peacock.

He had three more paws,

"Where are all my socks from Oz?"

In all shops they were out of stock.

[metelckina liudmila]

Доброго всем времени суток!

Наша коллекция пополняется!

Мои замечательные коллеги присоединяются!

 

Рады принять участие в творческих конкурсах всегда,

Их работы добавляю на наш форум, сюда.

 

Лимерики Цыганковой Юлии Евгеньевны, специалиста молодого,

С красным дипломом! Где найти еще такого?

There was a slim cat of the city,

Once he met a little kitty.
They decided to go to their grannies,
For playing tennis.
But the grannies fed them so pretty.

There lived a pussy- cat of towers,

She liked to gather flowers.
And she loved to build a house.
This cat made a friend with a mouse.
They played together a lot of hours.

There was a grey cat of the Rock,

Who liked to drink tea at 5 o`clock.
He did it in the socks,
In spite of the other cats from the rocks.
He was the most fashionable cat in the sock.

There was an old man of the Sun,

Whose cat was funny, brave and young.
But it was afraid of mice,
It had fainted twice.
And they decided to run from the Sun.

[metelckina liudmila]

Лимерики Васиной Ирины Алексеевны, Дюймовочки нашей,

Нет ее веселей и краше!

There was a cat of Liverpool

Who wanted to catch a mouse at school.
But her wish wasn't done,
Because all mice had gone.
They had holidays at the school of Liverpool.

 

There was a funny cat
Who liked to surf the Internet.
She subscribed to a blog
Which was written by a dog.
That curious cat in the Net.

 

Billy-the-cat once caught a mouse,
He wanted her to be his spouse.
The pretty mouse was so clever
That she answered bravely: "Never!"

So poor Billy left the house.

 

There was a girl called Jenny,
Once she visited her granny.
On a happy kitten's day
A little monster went away.
That playful Jenny at her granny.

[metelckina liudmila]

 Свои сегодняшние сочинения начинаю не с самого удачного:

There was a cat, fond of jumping with a bunny,

It was great, when in the street it was sunny.

Once there was on TV Eurovision,

 Hosts made for the cat a decision

To keep TV remotes, it isn’t even funny.

[metelckina liudmila]

There was a cat in a cap,

Who was mad about rap.

He went on tour

And became not poor

That famous cat in a cap!